New style of DO

This is happening beyong my boss when i working in Zouk club.
There is a supplier she sending Delivery of Order to my operation boss and there is attached a letter regarding of some new sample whihc she like to show it to my boss here.
She selling on carpet and fabric material. Which Zouk Club is always ordeing with the supplier for all the flooring and deco.
That is a new style of letter for the royalty client,

Dear MrXXX,

I would like to thanks u for the ordering of the carpet and i've have been delivered to zouk club here.

If let said i miss u, i come to zouk club to see u and i also will bring u some new sample of the carpet to show u.

From,
xxxx
(Ammended letter)